We have been writing persuasive texts in One S and learning how to give our opinion.
Here are a few samples of our grades work.
Lola is
not big enough to
go on
the ride.
We believe Lola is
not big enough
to go
on the ride.
Lola still need to grow taller to go on the ride.
We know that if young children go on a ride
that is too big for them they can get sick or scared half way through the ride
and not be able to get off.
Rides have an age limit for a reason.
Millie.H.
& Anabelle
Lola
is not big
enough to ride
on the roller
coaster.
We believe
when she finally
goes on the ride
she will find
it very scary. We
think she is
too small to go on the roller
coaster.
Young children need to wait to be old enough to
ride on the roller coaster.
By Amelia and Ella.
Lola is not big enough to ride on the roller coaster.
I believe she needs to grow bigger.
I think she will be scared once she gets on the ride.
I know little people shouldn’t go on enormous
rides until they are bigger.
By Giuliana
Lola is not big enough to ride on the roller coaster.
I believe that Lola is going to be too scared and
may get sick on the ride.
I think that Lola is too small to go on the ride.
I know Lola is too young for this ride.
Lola needs to be taller to go on such a big ride.
Antonio and Cristian
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